I can't fake my love
for you
any longer dear.
I can't pretend to be
happy,
full of joy.
This silver ring
on my left hand
means nothing at all
to either of us
anymore.
You know it is true.
Our relationship
has just died out.
There was a time
when I loved you dear,
very much indeed.
Now though
our flame
has went out,
died.
You can try to ignite it
all you want,
I myself have tried,
but nothing will change.
I am done kissing you
with no passion
between our lips.
I am tired of laughing
with no joy.
I'm done pretending
to be happy.
Dear,
I am done.
I am done,
I'm taking off
this ring.
Author notes
not going through
sooo?
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Intense
Such deep and powerful feelings expressed. So very well done. Thank you for sharing
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This is very good it sound like what Im going through right now.
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well done
this was throughly penned with great emotion,pray my sweet lexie, all things are possiable for thoses that believe, you are just pouring these out are you!
well done!
Rend
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awww lexie this is a great write hun!!..many people have gone through this..it shows much hurt and much pain..so much emotion lies in this poem..I love it
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I hope my dearest isnt truly hurt that this was just a poem that came to mind and not true at all because even though i dont have you to myself i want you to be happy just remember im here for you love
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awww Thats so sad...but the poems good
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There is a time to come ...
and a time to go ... I guess this is it? Sad.
But: you cannot be untruthful to your feelings. This is what your poem says. Do the right thing.
That is the hard part.
After that comes relief and forgiveness.
Blessed be.
Myra
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ahh one of lifes trickier situations. It's so hard to come out of a relationship in which you've grown comfortable, even when the passion and love has died. Yucky place to be. I like the simplicity and the honesty of this poem.
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