I saw your words,
Etched on paper.
The ones you wrote to me,
The ones you shared.
What does it mean?
This dream of mine.
It was only a dream,
Right?
I'm not psychic.
I can't see the future.
Why do I see them?
In my sleep.
I don't want these dreams,
They freak me out.
Why must I see those,
Words again.
I can't bear,
To fall again.
Just let those words,
Dissapear,
Like you.
Author notes
a lovely poem, about someone who left me, left me with words, and that's all. Sad eh? Don't read too deep, don't think too deep, it's just personal to me, and no one else... and it doesn't need to be. Enjoy.
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It's funny; I wrote a poem with the same title, but the meaning was different. I'm glad I got drawn to yours anyhow. Nice sentiments! Peace.
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A sad and poignant piece of poetry, wonderfully understated (always best in poetry). very, very fine.... bravo..
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overall a great write and don't fret the typos---they let you know who's actually paying attention.
As for 'words', well, that's all we have sometimes. The trick is learning which ones are hollow promises, like'forever' and 'always'!!
Joe
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I can't bear,
To fall again.
Just let those words,
Dissapear,
Like you.
I love the ending, but I love the whole poem.
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great job...only thing that is annoying me is that you spelled disappear wrong...sorry ^^"" pet peeve ya know
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wow... I never checked, but thanks... I'll fix it eventually... one day.. never? I don't remember when I wrote it... but I think I was... freaked? -.- don't ask.
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tis sad and i lik it
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this is a wonderful poem my friend, great job!
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