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Invisible to the world

On a street corner he sat in the rain

with ragged pants and a torn shirt, the

rain streaming down his black greasy hair,

A cup held in his hand and a coat of kaki greens,

he was begging for the change that

those who felt sorry for him would give but

most did not see this pitiful, lonely man, there

on the streets all alone, unseen by those

that passed him by.

 

One of societies rejects, that had no job, no hope,

no sunshine for this man, he lives in a brown cardboard

box, no heat, no real cover, no blankets, no warm bed,

his food is what he can find that day from change kind

strangers gave or the dumpsters behind stores and

restaurant gave up, invisible to the ones that could help

this poor soul, the doctors, lawyers, social workers,

firemen, oh but not the police who shoo them out of

their warm cozy spots sometimes with force.

 

You, societies people reject this person(s) because they

do not fit your mold, drug addicts, wino's, crazies and 

all the awful things in this life is what you see in this one

lone man, but let me be here to tell you not all see this

as they are homeless themselves, families, friends, doctors,

teachers and more who are to old, don't make enough, 

unemployed, or they aren't hired because they don't fit

the mold, these are the ones that you see in the streets

in the alleyways, cardboard boxes, abandoned cars, under

bridges and in doorways, they are the invisible ones.

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  • Shakes-spear
    September 8

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    very good

    There are those that are there by choices they made and those that have different reasons. I met one once that had survived a car accident that killed his wife and kids. He just could not pick himself up and fell into the homeless stage I found him in. I gave him a job and clothes. He is much better today and it warms my heart that I helped. We could do more as a society, but most are so busy getting more that we forget there are those that have less. Great write, The Shaker


  • summer51
    August 27

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    In my opinion, these "invisible" people you were describing ( like yourself in the past) were not actually the "rejected" people in the society. It is the person itself who feels that he/she is being denied by others.

    Poverty for instance is not a hindrance to succeed in life. I,myself, experienced that.

    Addiction. Well, there are many reasons why some people "tried" these kinds of stuff. Family problems, influence of the environment and the people he/she is with, or just for the "trip" of it, meaning curiosity. In the end, they couldn't get out of these drugs.... until they were drown.

    Unemployment. We can be self-supportive, have our own business without having a boss. Simple things we know that we can make "money" out of this knowledge can contribute to the "decrease" of the unemployment problems...everywhere and enaywhere in the world.

    "Invisible" ones are not being rejected by the society. They,themselves" only think that they are being rejected....because of self-pity.

    This is a good piece...for debate.


    summer51

  • Wow

    When I posted this contest, this thought had never crossed my mind. I'm so glad you entered my contest; you say so much and you're message really gets through. Good luck with the contest, and I hope that whatever the outcome, you'll find some way to pass this on to many people.
    <3


  • Solidified
    August 25

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    ahhh great message, one that isn't heard enough. Homeless people get such a bad rap and in reality any one of us could end up the next person the street- and to take it a step further than that- it shouldn't even matter. We need to step up and take care of our fellow humans, because that's the right thing to do. Great poem. Loved the descriptions and the voice you penned this with.


    • Abariel Raven gold member
      August 25
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      It is a personal message from me to other people. I have been there I know what it is like and I know what it is to be invisible.
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