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You're worth the suffering...

This blinding pain
sharpens each day.
My scars covered,
      pain buried.

With every breath
remaining,
I fight

    to love you.






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20 Words
Prompt:
"I tear my heart open i sew myself shut,
my weakness is that i care too much"
- Scars by Papa Roach.

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  • dannyjay
    September 15
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    short and powerful. this person must be quite special


  • markgrif gold member
    August 26
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    Yeah... it could struggle.

    Nice work.