"A strange case of mistaken identity"
Early man sat in the forest, staring at the beauty
"what grace.
What wonder.
what magnificence...
What is this?"
he watched and a presence filled the sky
"so strange
so breathtaking
so inspiring of awe...
this can not be of natural law"
he thought to himself
as he muttered the word 'GOD'
(for hydrogen fission and fog, had not entered vocabulary yet)
And so began a long and terrible journey
A contest entry
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Comments
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Haha- love it! This is just hilarious and absolutely amazing. Nice job!
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!!! this put a great big smile on my face. The ponderance and conclusion and then the explanation thereof. The final line CLINCHES it!! Great!

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hahaha! i friggin love it!!! i love it!!! i love it!!! and i love the explanation ....
(for hydrogen fission and fog, had not entered vocabulary yet)
... it is so fitting!!!



