Words colliding into
one another.
Becoming stuck
on the tip of my
tongue.
I want to scream
and yell at you,
but instead I sit
silent,
choking on my emotions.
Your apologizing,
calling me your baby.
It's all a lie.
Been through this before.
You guys are all the same.
I turn away.
Still not speaking.
I give up.
I just want to stop everything.
Love is a lie,
we all believe.
I give up
trying to believe.
I now see the truth
and accept it.
Love is a lie.
Author notes
not going through right now, i have a great bf, love hime so much, steven charles wayne powell, he is my honey in my tea, lol.
sooo?
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Beautiful writing
I really felt the emotion.
But i still want to believe that love isn't always a lie.
I think you are very talented
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Interesting twist
There certainly are times in everyone's life when they feel as though love is a lie and that good things never come from it except pain. It's a good thing that once someone forces their way back into your heart, that your new love will never fill the hole left by the previous, but instead make a new home that once again makes you feel more then you thought possible.
Also, is line 8 suppose to be "but instead I sit"?
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You show alot of truth in your words... I too have often thought of love as just another lie... Yet I have found in life that sometimes the truth can be even worse... For me... It is often that I push the truth aside, and embrace the lies... What I am trying to say, is yes your porbably right about love being nothing but lies... But what would life be like without those lies... Very good poem. {And sorry about the ranting...}
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Can't imagine that I havent commented this till now..Great write babe
I turn away.
Still not speaking.
I give up.
I just want to stop everything.
Love is a lie,
we all believe.
I give up
trying to believe.
I now see the truth
and accept it.
Love is a lie.
oh btw..HAHA you have school!!!
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ooh! this is such a total wowzer!!! it was aweosme... your lines were short and sbappy, which is good for this kind of poems! and your AN was soo cute! lol, keep penning!
~RANJI
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good poem dear..brought abt emotions really well in this dear!
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