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Lessons

A number of lessons I’ve learned
In the short time I have spend.
I've learned how to begin
And I've learned how the chapter comes to an end.

But In these past few months
There are two which haunt like ghost
I've learned how to get cared
And I've learned to grow worst.

You began in my life as a tiny grain
And suddenly fled without leaving a stain
Though we are both missing in each others vein
Nothing stopped our friendship to drain.

I lie at night and brush my brain
For doing the silly mistake like insane.
If my words didn’t hit you like cane
I would have never felt this pain.

As I refer to the lessons of my life
I wonder why I’ve acted like a beast
Forgiveness never came to assist
But something hostile; I expected it least.

I guess my soul was all diffused,
When you felt tired of being used.
And even though I know I'm guilty,
It was only I, to be accused.

Gradually, now you stopped to say hi
And left me counting the stars in the sky
No matter how many years pass by
Your sweet memories in me will never die.

And so I've learned to end this
Without an urge to cry
These are my final words to you,
"I love you and goodbye."



By: Glenn

Author notes

This poem is dedicated to Neysa Mechell Vaz .
I wrote this poem based on my best friend Named NEYSA who is now departed from me.

“I miss u a lot Neys”.




Writo on: Tuesday, June 03, 2008
By: Glenn Dias

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  • perfectdarkangel
    October 17

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    This poem is very beautiful and sad, i love moving poems such as this, although the rhyme scheme at the beginning seems a little forced but as it goes on it flows more and more but besides that its very deep which is the important thing awsome job ^.^

  • It's sad- it brought tears to my eyes once I came to understand it. It was a wonderful piece to read, kept writing, because you've certainly have an immense amount of talent. Splendid job!


  • Shuberth
    October 13
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    SAD

    Yo! I can well relate to this poem… it gives me that painful feeling as I recall someone who came in my life and then disappeared… I can feel your pain and know what you were going through… at least you’ve learnt to end this without crying but I … very emotional poem and I know all can relate to this one too….

    Great Write
    Thanks for sharing this with us

    Shuberth