It was only a kiss
though it lasted all night.
In a state of bliss
our souls took flight.
It was only one night
though it lasted all year
and everything was right
for true love to appear.
It was only one year
though it lasted our life
a shared love so dear
made us husband and wife.
It’s the treasure in my heart
though it was only a kiss.
It was the sweet beginning
of a lifetime of bliss.
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A very loving creation
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Beautiful write...so romantic and intimate.
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Very sweet, sentimental and romantic. I like how you build on the first line to create a flow, and almost a sense of weightiness by then, a powerful thing that started with a simple act of a kiss. Good luck in the contest!
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Wow, this is such a sweet write!
I loved every line in it and hope
that you do well with it in this
contest. Thanks a lot for sharing
it here!
Jeremy0826
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