Breath, released -
as does a menagerie of stars
to dance on a formless plateau.
And with each one,
I thank light's realms
a million-and-one times
for it secretes undoubtedly
and purely
joy condensed,
and my appreciation for life.
A contest entry
- breathe by Namita.
800 points, ended October 16, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow! That made me wanna dance!
and that hardly ever happens! Beautifully penned
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A very uplifting piece. Much enjoyed
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Joy's Breath
good luck in the contest, because this is good!!! have a nice day, -slick99
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Such a very pretty tribute to yourself and your touch.
way nice
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Thank you, but the tribute is moreso towards life. Smile
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In every breath we take we are blessed,
your write reminds me of this truth.
very lovely
God bless my friend...
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Thank you so much my fellow Piscean!
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Wow, this is so finely crafted and well thought-out, so elegant in its wordings and meanings. It says so much within so little and explains the beauty that we all get to possess each and every day. How could we take it for granted yet so oftentimes do? Excellent presentation.
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Thak you so much for taking time to read this tiny poem that comes from the heart.
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Write on, sis.
Dez
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When star light hits the ground it can seem like it is dancing, can't it. Other than the word 'too' which I think should be 'to' this is a wonderful poem.
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outstanding
You write with such soul, it's hard not to get pulled into yours.
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