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Choice

I look up in the sky at night
to see the glowing stars
I think to myself is this the last night
or will i see another?
I feel like i am the sky
swimming with ideas of hate and loss
having to face the world everynight

I feel like the sea
taking in darkness
washing away its wrongs everyday

I got told that i do wrong everyday
I got told i was useless
I got told i wasnt wanted

Now i look up in the sky
and hold a knife to my wrist
should i hold it to my neck
should i overdose myself
should i hang myself
should i? should i?

Its not what i should
Its what i will

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  • Xxhidden in lyfxX
    September 7
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    thx
  • emogrl
    September 2
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    ive thought of those thimgs so many times...why is life so hard?


  • Glenn
    August 29
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    dear Xxhidden in lyfxX

    Its really saddest poem.
    but i dont wanna wave u goodbye

    No matter; whether it is minor or major but suffering exists in this today’s world.

    "Its not what i should
    Its what i will "
    Please dont do that..........
    there is no1 in this world who loves you may be but God loves you and ofcouse myself too.

    Poem was written well.