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I'll Be Fine

Got the terrible news,
Got this breathing machine to use,
But i'll be fine.

Coughing and weezing,
And heaving,
Who thought it was......

Athsma.

Even though its only mild,
I am still just a child,
So everythings devistating to me,
But I'll be fine.


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I found out I had athsma when I was ten. I was the only one in my whole class with this condition. I just felt so alone cause im the first to get this in my family.

When you got bad news, did you go in shock?

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  • Flightless Wings
    September 18

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    The doctors gave me some bad news a few years ago. My mind just froze and wouldn't believe them. Does that count as going into shock? That aside, I loved the poem. It was great.


  • elfstone
    August 28

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    awww brave Manda.... plus *GASP*

    GO MANDA GO MANDA YOU CAN DO IT GO MANDA IT'S YOUR BIRTH DAY W00T W00T this poem was worthy of my gasp. good job.

  • stoneage silver member
    August 27
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    I have a sister who lives in Chicago, she has this problem.
    I live in Nebraska and people in Nebraska have this problem.
    The earth and the sky are like a womb, where humanity grows
    but men forsake their mother.
    Do what it takes to breath.
    Fight for clean air!


    • elfstone
      August 30
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      she called me and told me to reply.

      she said that she'll be soooooooooo fine cuz she has TONS AND TONS of help from people like her mom and dad (not so much her brother) oh and me (she's my best friend in real life)