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You and Your Broken Touch

Verse 1
Lies you told run through my mind and escape from my lips
Bruises linger on my face covered in Maybelline
I can still feel your fingertips brushing my lips
And mutter those two words you never meant
"Im Sorry"

Chorus
[Currently being written]

Verse 2
Everyone always said we were wrong for each other
That you were the devil in disguise
Memories of your kiss in all its shattered bliss
Never again will i fall for those cheap tricks
Your tired excuses and hands that cripple

Bridge
If I should stay would you change
Should I bite my lip and pretend that this never happened
We were never meant to be in this misery
We were suppose to be the new romance of the century

Verse 3
But the lies you told me ran though my mind
I can still feel your fingertips brushing against my cheeks
Leaving bruises beneath my skin
I wont take sorry no more its time for me to walk out the door
Ill leave the bruises behind

Chorus 1x
Verse 3 2x

Author notes

Well this is actually a combination of two songs i wrote i didnt like separately so i put them together and here it is.

I dont really like it that much but i put it up anyway,i may end up deleting it or rewriting either the whole song or just a part of it to make it a bit more meaningful.

Ill try to post the chorus in a little while.
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8) Write a song. I don't care what it's about, as long as it isn't just screaming. I want words that mean something. If you need help on the format, google some song lyrics or look at my poem [[it's really a song]] "Baby, I'm the one." This is the only option that can be over 30 lines but don't make it a novel.

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  • pinkheart17
    November 12
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    i like the title alot it fits nicely with the song

  • Missa
    October 26
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    great! i loved this! thanks for entering! good luck in the contest.