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Flesh or Beast

 

 

From wence they came 
birthed in mans flesh,

odor and decay.

Vampyre or Lycan

it matters..... not. 

 

An endless thirst

of appetite and greed.

I arose, hungrily;

FlamesDragoness.

 

Testing mightily

tips of sword

and soulful plea.

Sacrifice or honorable of deeds.

 

Do not dare to throw

Gold or Silver,

pleading;

heavens mercies.

 

I soar the realms

of poetry,

listening carefully,

for hearts of prosperity.

 

Darkness does surround,

despite blinding suns relief.

Ancient creatures feast

trembling and weak, eagerly.

 

Lines are drawn boldly

In the realms of reality;

Flesh or Beast…the fires

Of the dragon

consume and reveal

humanity nakedly.

 

Flesh or Beast

which are thee?

Lycan and Vampyre

kneel humbly unto

our Dragons feet.
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

awaiting your answer...lest you dream of flames consuming.....

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  • Master Dog
    September 27

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    This is like a windswept plain. There is no emotion, but we can imagine a dragon flying over the 'realms of poetry' and observing man and beast as they wallow in the shadows.

    You use assonance well...e.g. came/decay, plea/deeds, carefully/prosperity.....

    This creates a very smooth flight, so that the reader has time to think about the world and the way we behave in it.

    You make humanity look so small!

    Nice work,

    Mordegast


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 1

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    I am glad you have joined the war
    and I look forward to see how it will end.

    Hope to see you in the next round.

    Riftkin


  • FlamesDragoness gold member
    August 31
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    The altars of honor we protect

    are Heavens SILVER and FIRES Truth....
    DEATH to the Lycan and Vampyre....

    upon their scent, filling their eyes, veins, and
    flesh with Swords of Silver and fire's Truth.
    Dismantling and dissolving hell's claim of soul
    and flesh.

    Nature Mithya...suffering creature of dark,
    your sleep of peace awaits....merciful and swift
    we can be...upon your arrival!

    flamesdragoness

  • FlamesDragoness gold member
    August 30
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    TO: Wolf Mancini...

    Do you see how they crawl to approach...Wolf Mancini..
    tender and pitiful poor beast....
    we hear your soul ache upon the rising of the moon

    growing are we ..silently..the dragon...
    no wings have you to soar the midnight skies.
    We will be mighty and swift with our silver cross
    to deliver you into the realms of peace.
    flamesdragoness

    • nature mithya gold member
      August 30

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      The werwolfs

      Researches show they are in high consciousness state and level.
      Dragon slayers as men is quite widely known.
      In warfare stealth is of prime importance. Wings really cannot protect a giant dragon from wolf packs.
      Lol
      Do let us Lycans know whose human heart you carry in your chest as most dragons did not survive a normal mans on slaughter.

  • ventus11
    August 29
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    honestly i dont know what to say

  • HpWICKEDangel
    August 29
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    this was different but i liked. thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


  • darell
    August 29

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    Captivating

    A stirring piece that captures the
    darkness that is of an alternate world.
    A realm where mortals fuse with immortality.
    To unleash their unrest in exotic splendors
    too adventurous for the faint of heart.
    Nicely written. Good job

  • Wolf Mancini
    August 29

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    These dragons are like mosquitoes...

    Time for the bug spray...
    The visual of a dragon in battle with me is most exciting.
    I look forward to eating you as well.

    wolf

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