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Happy Birthday Beret55

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Happy Day to You kind Sir,

A hummingbird sung Your

Praises to me & asked to

Please tell You that

Your heart and soul are blessed;

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Beret55, we wish to Thank You for everything

In this life You have accomplished; Our

Respect for you grows each passing dawn;

Together with the hummingbird we sing for You,

Happy Birthday & Many Returns;

Dear friend I hope You have a relaxing day &

Always keep a smile upon

Your face & Remember You are Loved

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Happy Birthday P.N. http://allpoetry.com/Beret55

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  • Desire gold member
    September 11

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Happy Birthday Beret55
    Welcome to the Party
    Woot
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: Respect for you grows...when I read that part I kept seeing a flower from seedling to opened petals in a garden- like in slow motion - Love how You penned from within with well wishes to bring forth a smile I imagine P.N. smiling from ear to ear after inhaling Your words Wonderful Acrostic And last two lines grabbed hard
    Excellent images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Shakes-spear
    August 30

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    very nice

    This acrostic is a very nice write and birthday wish. I enjoyed the read very much and I hope that your wishes come true for this wonderful person! Good luck in the contest, The Shaker


  • Sandygram silver member
    August 30

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    So Beautiful

    Oh, What a wonderful poem for his birthday. He is such a wonderful friend who served his country and is just the best there is. Thank you for thinking iof him. You take care.

    Blessings,
    Sandy


  • Poet Muse gold member
    August 29
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    What a surprise!!!


  • Valley Girl Greeters member
    August 29

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    A fantastic tribute. You are so good at these acrostic writes! I am sure that he will love this write. I think that dedications are so touching because it shows that you care about someone that often times you haven't even met yet. Beautiful stuff hun! ♥


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    August 28

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    This is beautiful, you have done a lovely dedicaton to someone you obviously admire much. Best to you in the contest and Happy Birthday to Beret55

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