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Blood

Blood
In the carpet
I hear you

Blood
On the blade
I feel you

Blood
On the bed
I see you

Blood
On your arm
I loved you

Blood
In this dark
I left you

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  • robertomano24
    August 29
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    nice write. really powerful. i liked it!! to bad i cant give u more points


  • Amber Moon
    August 29

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    wow, you know it is pretty hard to pull off a repetitive poem {spelled that wrong but} this was really amazing, i loveloveloved it, this was really good,i really loved it, it feel sooo, i don't know, lyk.... EVILLLLLL MWAHHAHAHA... haha, but seriously, this was amazing, it REALLY, i mean it lyk, REALLLLLLYYYYYYYY, blew me away =PD...