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True Love

true love...

is it only just a dream

is it's existence merely here-say

will I find it or will it find me

is it only just a fantasy

a shrouded gossamer dream

will I find it or will it find me

my heart, though broken, is open to the idea of

a shrouded gossamer fantasy

my heart, though broken, is open to the idea of

true love...

 

 

 

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  • Lowell Poe
    September 12

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    It is hard to kill the need for love.
    We all have had out hearts dragged around lass ...smashed ...
    broken into micro bits of red.
    But still we carry on...searching...hoping...
    But it is only when we project ourselves to the world as one who loves ourselves,
    can we truly give and receive
    the love and appreciation we all deserve.
    True love finds us,
    life happens when were busy living.
    Your piece shows the strong human emotion of the tireless heart which will never ever give up.
    I love this for the tenacity it shows and the human need for love and companionship.

    Great job 'lil' gypsy,
    LOWELL


  • Grateful
    September 9
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    "true love...
    is it only just a dream"

    starting lines are great...there are millions of people asking the same question,
    including myself...true luv dwells within its own essence...which is constantly changing with time...i really enjoyed the natural quest within our hearts...thank you so much for sharing your thoughts...all the best..

  • Ulimate
    September 4
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    *CLAP*

    Well done! I really like this poem and i love the visuals.