Sitting in sorrow gazing out into blue
awaiting the return of
awaiting the return of
the one who makes her whole
In a list
A contest entry
- Melanie Masuth Picture Inspired #11 by PhantomsAngel87.
450 points, ended September 1, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any thoughts?
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This just goes to show you that you can say alot with just a few words. very well written.
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I feel the intensity of these words poet. The one thing in this life I so detest is..."waiting". Sigh!
Excellent! The bravity is superb! It allows us to feel what you're feeling.
Much Love,
Renee
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Awesome write in such few lines
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Just wonderful, in a few lines you captured the essence of the picture and shined a light upon it
Beautiful poem!
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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I really like this one.
It's short but it's perfect. :]
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Aw it's so short but it says so much
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