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Has No Gain

I long to feel his breath,
bathing my lips in warmth,
his eyes glazing my face in love.
Such a passion remains with me,
I've not received his kisses.

I want from him that intimacy.
Only to know his strength,
his heat, O yes,
the tremors of his body, 
to feel him close,
pressing his glory-
his heavenly gifts-
firmly against me.
Simply to be close,
as one without sex.

O God,
I'm in regrets;
regrets,
sentiment in pain.

I long for him,
to no avail,
this love, O mine,
has no gain.

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it's all made up. Pretty good though, right?

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  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 2

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    "his eyes glazing my face in love.
    Such a passion, has remained with me" awwww

    "I long for him,
    to no avail,
    I'm in pain. " -tear- i feel you


  • Griswold silver member
    August 29

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    Sad write well done. Never regret anything, just learn and move forward. best of luck in the contest...Scott


  • Amber Moon
    August 29
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    woww, great job...
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