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Alone

You shun me
Hunt me
Hate me
Hurt me
All because you don't understand

I hide
I run
I fight
But still I lose

You should try what I have
Sadness, hurt, jealousy
An outcast
Alone in the world
No friends
No lover
Forever alone

I should try what you have
Happiness, love, everthing
Sururounded by Happiness
Followers who carry the signs of love
True friends
Found love

Perhaps my hand should slip
And you fall to your death
But still you forever have followers

Perhaps my hand should slip
And I fall to my death
But still, I am forever alone

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Wrote it when I was kinda pissed off

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  • t19152
    August 31
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    THanks for the comment. Well I wrote the poem after a when he was trying to act as though he was upper class. I don't hate him all the time normaly but i still find it irritating. Basicly a show off I hate those.

  • Iyaden
    August 29

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    I think you owe to concentrate that emotional focus on getting yourself better. Hating someone just because they are better is not going to mend things. Your poem shows you have a rich inner world. Share it and you may be surprised as to how many people will relate to that. Use your insecurity to improve and evolve. Growth comes with struggle and people who have everything going for them are usually more stagnant than a puddle of dry S**** ...you get the picture.