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You...

I've never smiled at you
and actually meant it..

 

You never never tell the truth

and you never have proof.

 

You always think we hate you..

when its you that hates us....

 

You make up crap about my dad

It makes me so bloody mad!

 

You cut your arms In front of us

and trash the place to death

 

Why do you think I'm acting like this

when YOU fucked me up in the head!

 

You row with dad you try

to get him mad just so he will hit you

so you will get sympathy!.

 

Why do you make my life hell?!

you need to see a doctor because this

can't go on much longer

 

Stop getting so thin..

you weigh less than me!

how do you think that make me feel!?

 

stop being mad and get

your act together stop thinking

that your so clever!

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  • Rhythm Child silver member
    October 29
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    great poem, such raw emotion

  • Shuberth
    October 4

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    this make me understand a lot more... sorry for all the trouble you went throught 'cause of ur mum....


    • Broken - gurl
      October 6
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      well I'm still going throught it now thats why my life is so horrible and the place i call " home" should rather be called hell. sorry i replied quite late I was just looking at every poem I've written so far and looking at the coments lol so i replied to this one

      Tash

  • dark-a-bliss
    September 12
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    i think it's great


  • SiLeNtFaLlEnAnGeL
    September 3

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    Unfortunately my kids were on your end until I got help. But I did get help and now things are much better. My kids are happier and I am also. I only hope that things will work out for you. Another great poem hun.

  • Wind 03
    August 31

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    wooow

    sorrry to hear such thing happening to you! well written. and keep smiling

    your friend
    juliet

  • wow!! thats an awful lot to go through. i can see how u feel.

  • madlove4you
    August 29

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    Wow thi is relly sad im sorry that you have to go trou all that my mom is nuts so i know how that shit is

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