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Met With A Kiss

Glances met and lost
Across a room they are tossed
From me to him and back again
He's coming now; I can't help but grin.

We fumble for words unspoken
We apologize; a vase gets broken
We agree to leave-fast to nowhere
Outside in the cold, damp night air

It happened so suddenly
Can't remember how he came to be holding me
Staring down into my eyes intently
Holding me firm, but ever so gently

Ice cold hands capture each side of my face
Our cold noses touch; quickening my heart's pace
Lips collide in sensual lust
His tongue exploring my mouth in one quick thrust.

Forty seconds later, not a minute more
I snapped out of my daydream to answer my door
There he was standing with a smile so wide
Here to take me out for a KISS-ingly good time!!!

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  • lilAj
    September 1
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    ~Aj


  • nevadapoet
    September 1

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    What a clever write, nicely done. A perfect write for the contest with great flow and imagery. Thank you for the entry and best of luck.
    Nevadapoet
  • sweet this mae me gittery re something which is rare for me i liked it good luck to you in the contest *music*


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 31
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    damn

    this was very nice!


  • Kazytc gold member
    August 30

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    Wow how lovely!

    Lovely sentiments and ambiance of love, affection and mutual appreciation of the love you clearly share and the essence of the romance and feeling amidst beautiful breezy emotions and ahared happiness.
    Lovely to read and so poetically graphic and evident of true love at its best, between soul mades plain to see here, totally delightful.
    Well done, love it, write on!
    Hope you win gold in every contest you enter, you well
    deserve to!
    Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc XX


    • cre8tiv-writer
      August 30
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      Wow, thanks so much!! You makeme sound like an awesome writer, hahahaha!! Your compliment is much appreciated!
  • mcfreeman
    August 30
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    Day dreaming ...you

  • carl dunford
    August 29
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    This is a lovely sensual poem, with a touch of humour.
    made me smile, Carl x


  • hotchocolate gold member
    August 29
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    nice and sensual its great!!!


  • aratidevi
    August 29
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    Wow

    This was nicely written. I like how it went from playful to sensual and back to playful
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