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The strangest of cakes



Now here is a treat that always for me
But who could have thought it was right
With sponge cake and jam in a flaky pastry
And covered in icing that's white
Then smother the top with some coconut shred
The fool who first made one was right off his head

Now why it's called cheesecake's a mystery to me
It's never been near any cheese
The jam that they use has no fruit you can see
The cake is a terrible tease
I don't much like coconut shredded on not
But the mixture of all is a flavour that's hot

Don't Google for pictures there weren't any there
And eating a picture is mad
Just dream of a cake that has coconut hair
The image you're getting's not bad
If you are in London, I'll buy one for you
Then you can get hooked on a flavour that's new


Author notes

Picture on the way when I buy one to photograph!
In Harrow, a suburb of the Great Wen.

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  • DogFish silver member
    August 31
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    ...why England is famous for beer and not cake!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 30
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    damn... bunnies ran off!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 30

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    Ah so THAT'S what it is! Jings - I have no idea what they'd call that in Fisher and Donaldson's in Dundee, but certainly NOT a cheesecake!

  • Amera gold member
    August 29

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    Sounds fattening! This poem is wonderful and the imagery of taste is original and sweet.



    Love,
    Amera♥


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 29

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    Wonderful job here hon.
    Sounds well...coconut hair?
    Yikes coconut is great
    but image of both combined hahahah.

    Love ya
    best of luck to you

    Tory


  • Dalaney gold member
    August 29
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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    August 29

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    How very strange ... not sure I like the coconut either
    I await the picture with interest.


  • paulcreates silver member
    August 29

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    That sounds much different than Philadelphia Cheese Cake that we have in the states. It's made with creamed cheese and either left plain or topped with a bit of fruit. It's not near as elaborate as your version.
    Oh yes, the poem was tasty as well Jeff.

    Paul


    • cricketjeff gold member
      August 29
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      We have that sort of artificial cheesecake too, but nothing beats the real thing, fancy putting cheese in a cheesecake!!! The world's gone mad
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