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[ There was a house, ]

There was a house,
Where every night,
A bloody head fell down the chimney.
They offer me to spend the night,
What should I say,what should I do.
I say "No way!You can't make me!"
But then they make me enter through the chimney.
I fall in the fireplace.
Am I alive,am I alive?
I stumble out,
Upon the living room.
I nervously step around.
And I do not know what to do.
What should I do,what should I do?
And then it comes.
Lands in the fire.
I pray to God to meet my desires.
Please tell me this isn't happening.
I just might die tonight.
Please please please.
Let me live.
The bloody head lays there stiff.
But then it moves,
And looks at me.
It gestures me,
To come with him.
What should I do,what should I do?
I thought that I might die tonight.
What should I do,what should I do?
A horrible dream is coming true.
It's coming true,it's coming true.
I know what to do.
An idea comes into my head.
But just as it came, it was gone.
Gone.Gone.Gone.
A horrible dream is coming true.
It's coming true,it's coming true.

Do you think it is pretty scary?

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  • it is scary. very artistic for a younger one.


  • nichtmich silver member
    August 29

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    Good way to build up suspense! Slowly and surely you find yourself in more and more trouble. This has a dreamlike quality to it, like a nightmare you can't wake up from. Good rhyme and scary effects. Kudos!