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Flowers

I want you to have these little bunches of flowers...
I found them on the way over here back a couple of hours.

Don't know if they have any thorns on...
Or if by now all the thorns are gone.

Maybe if you spread them in the summer they might grow...
Or maybe in winter but I really don't know.

I really don't.

Maybe they are packed with some kind of memory...
Or if they are just fully loaded with envy.

I guess one day they where taken care of...
Or maybe they were abandon by someone's love.

Maybe they were taken out of the ground...
Or maybe they were left scattered all around.

I really can't say.

Oh you my little dear...
Are so wonderful and so sincere.

You are the flower I want to hold...
Cause I feel warm when I am cold.

You are the dreams of my loneliness...
Do you love me or not is what I want to guess.

I really can't tell.

Around you I'm like a new world that has begun...
And you are what gives me life, my sun.

I want you to become my only universe...
You just make things better when it's worse.

You're my guiding star...
Always close and never far.

That much I do know.

So here are the flowers I talked about...
Some are still new and some already dried out.

Maybe they live by lying...
Or they are not worth crying.

Maybe they are completely alone...
Because their whereabouts are unknown.

Could I be getting close?

I would love to give you a summer...
So they are able to grow much stronger.

Or should I give you a simple winter...
So they freeze everything that becomes sinister.

Maybe how about I give you an illusion?..
Or will if give you too much confusion?

There's really no reason.

I'm hoping these flowers bring you closer near...
And even maybe they will make everything more clear.

What you can't say... Say it with flowers.

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  • Sunrize Angel
    September 23

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    Yes Flowers

    Many flowers are wonderfully given but my favorite flower is the white rose. It can be changed to any color and means anything that you want it to. The only time you can really find the white flower is when summer comes around so its my favorite season. Again you are the most amazing writer and man that i know.


  • Adsaige gold member
    September 5

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    Every one of your poems I love.
    I just can't NOT love what your write above!
    I think perhaps I'll write a reply
    and write it in rhyme to bring a tear from your eye.

    Not all things can be said in flowers
    because they live only a few hours.
    Like they're a sick cancer patient
    hiding from death beneath their blanket.

    Still, we'll always search for contentment
    most will turn to resentment,
    but there is still some hope yet,
    and if you don't try, it's something you'll always regret!


    Wasn't that just beautiful?



    My gorgeous poet! A !
    Adsaige

    • Climax gold member
      September 5
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      Excellent dear, simple excellent!

      However... Nothing last forever..!


  • Grunts Girl
    September 2
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    "I guess one day they where taken cared of..."
    cared should be care

    very sweet write

  • Dalaney gold member
    August 31
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    i can tell you are latin love, lane

  • aww this is so sweet CD
    I love it alot, its really cute
    and you always write so well
    all my love this flows great
    -kitty xxx

  • Flowergirl
    August 30
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    aww that is very sweet i love it ....nice write and keep it up......

  • kel dog
    August 30
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    very sweat. i love it. very good. every word is me fav. i love it very much.


  • Midnight Rose14
    August 29

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    this is perfect....that's it perfect...loved

    "You're my guiding star...
    Always close and never far."

    ...no idea why, but it flows very well....you must keep writing or i might cry...
    love ya,
    MR


  • WaterDragoon
    August 29

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    Wow i love it!!!
    this is a great poem i love flowers alot lol its aswome. Great job hun
    ~Moonchild~

  • evilbatwoman
    August 29
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    This is absolutely gorgeous. I love it.

  • Flowers so sweet
    a frarance beyond comprehension
    a happiness in the growth of nature
    MEnds wounds that being to taper

    great job!

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