I feel like I'm being torn apart
One by one
It's just begun
My life is over
It's done
Do you hear it?
I'm screaming these words
I'm trembling to tell you
I love you
I'm so sick of this life
Let me live with out this pain
I'm breaking apart
Do you hear me?
Do you hear my screams?
Do you taste my tears?
Get me away from my fears
Please save me
God can't hear me
He won't save me
I use to be the key
Now I'm free
Nobody remembers my last words
No one cares if I'm alive
Maybe if I just say yes
Maybe this sever pain will be over
Everyone will leave me alone
All alone in this nightmare
I Can't bare this suffering pain no longer
What's done is done
What's dead is dead...
Author notes
I Think this everyday but no one can hear me...
Are you like me?
Comments
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Scraeming in silence...I so understand thisw, been there doen that aq million times...nice strong write from the heart...deep subject that many wish to never talk about, but really that is the only way to be reborn and start again...well done in emotions and sorrow...
Wishing you the best!
mystic
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woah, it takes so much to put things like this out for everyone else to read, and its hard to pretend to be happy for other people
eventaully the pain eases enough to pass through the day, and as time goes on, the pain seems to dissappear. i hope whatever thats goin on to make you feel this way stops, but then again, what doesn't kill us makes us stronger.
idk if you noticed or even care, but collapse in your title is mispelled.
really good job though.
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