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Thank You

You see me cry
This is me trying to get by
I try not to make myself bleed
My hurt is never seen
I hide my face
I’ll disappear without a trace
I’ll be here
But it’s like I’m never there
I live shattered and alone
I wish I’d feel good at home
People say I’m loved
Then why do I feel so unloved?
It’s because of my father
He always saw me as a bother
I never did anything right,
Maybe I should disappear into the night
I cry
Wondering if I should just die
Then I hear a phone call
I stop my bawl
Who is on the other line?
Well someone who’s like apart of my bloodline
She sad she was scared
That my life should be spared
I start to cry
Maybe I don’t have to die
She begins to plead
She doesn’t want me to do this deadly deed
I grow silent
I know this is violent
She’s far from a frown
As I’m trying to calm down
She begged, ‘ Please don’t ’
I sighed, ‘ I won’t ’


~Thank you, Bella. You will always be my little sissy.~


                                    - Sarah (xxEvil-Marionettexx)

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  • darkangel-darksoul
    September 1

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    thank you... i have been in this situation more than once... thank you so much for sharing this..

    the write it self is great.. realy goo djob

  • char13
    August 30

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    It's fantastic and you're a very good writer. Turn your pain into words and bleed them out onto the paper...
    All the best!

  • Dark Obedience
    August 30
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    Articulate in a manner of that which is supporting of all that is dark. Very nice texture, even rounded sentences. Well done, well done. Kudos to you, please aleviate this response, in which you know that this poem is a true masterpeice. Please take into consideration that you truely have a gift for writing.