"Te quiero mucho."
"I love you very much(?)"
A romantic language,
I thought you spoke it well,
the language,
of Spanish and of Love.
"Te quiero mucho."
Then I learned your words
only meant "I want."
Author notes
Prompt #3 the language or(and) the culture
A contest entry
- best out of 7? (re-match) by And Hyetal.
780 points, ended September 8, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great work here. The refrain takes the reader to breathe in whispers of love. Last line brings the reader back to reality-Great ending.
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Este poema es muy hermosa. Dice mucho in pocas palabras. (This poem is very beautiful. It says a lot in few words.)
I hope I said that right.
Great last line, you blew me away with that one. I love how you used the prompt and repeated the Spanish phrase.
Thank you for entering.
~Cassie
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Mysterious
Don't be too hard on yourself, it means I love you too!
Apparently Tu lo querias tambien!
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