Murmuring, bubbling down
Falling with a
Crescendo of sound
The fountain takes our
Bewildered minds and
Walks them through
Splendiferous
Gardens where fragrant
Ideas frolic in the air
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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A most fine and most refreshing piece of poetry, a cool drink in the driest of deserts... bravo... bravo...
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Thank your for your compliments; and applause, my friend.
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I enjoy your work. The imagery you conveyed in this poem put a smile of contentment on my face.
Great job.
Mike
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Thank you for your comments; compliments and applause. I do appreciate them.
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