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I Love You

You say thank you for telling me,
then you go off on me.

Fucking brilliant plan buddy.
Best fucking plan ever.

You tell me to be safe.
I tell you to get spent.

You tell me you care.
I tell you that I have been lied to before.

You tell me not to get hurt.
I tell you that is a job, not my life.

You tell me to keep my promises.
I say I only keep the ones my FRIENDS give me.

Thanks for fucking things up today,
you made me feel so much better.

But it is my turn to lie now.


I love you.

Author notes

Ok, yeah, I am kinda pissed at me buddy,
he is dumb.
AND SO
I write this to keep me from stoning him.
Cause I think that would be fun.

Oh well.
This is my angst.
And no,
I do not hate him,
I am just really effing ticked off.

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  • camille-morin
    September 25

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    I really like this poem. The form works perfectly. Hope you felt better after writing it...it's an eloquent "rant".
    Sincerely,
    Camille Morin


  • B0b
    August 31
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    this is good.,...really good