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You I Am

 

‘You and I enthrall’
Offers open horizons
Useless frontiers fall

I, you, osmosis
At last discover, reaching
Metamorph-oasis

 

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Background DKN
http://allpoetry.com/DK%20akaLunaticSerene

Pic gwion gwion or Bradshaw Clothes Peg Figure Period
North West Australia c. 50,000 B.C.

see
http://www.bradshawfoundation.com/bradshaws/index.php

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  • Jenny84
    September 1

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    I really like the way you wrote this. It shows you really put in some effort. Great job. Good luck in the contest.

  • csmmoms2
    September 1

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    Lovely

    You I am or is it ... am I you?
    When you're in love walking down the street it's different.
    You see rose pedals sparkling all around you.

  • trekkergirl silver member
    August 31
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    This is sooooo cute. I just adore it. Thanks for sharing it


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 31

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    "reaching 

    Metamorph-oasis ..."


    Ahhh, what a lovely thought that is, dear Scribe.

    Makes one want to swim every channel in between.