Silly Billy,
Is really silly,
Loves Rhyme Town,
Lives in Philly!!
You can see that,
Billy is really silly!!
Idolizes Cher,
Loves his wild hair,
Loves the fact that
You love his silliness!!!
Author notes
This was my first acrostic. I'm sorry it's not very good. I've never tried these before. If you don't like it, just tell me in the comments. i need the truth. please tell the truth. even if it is painful...
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Its cute .
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I know how in your author notes you were afraid we wouldn't like it. "I'm sorry it's not very good
If you don't like it, just tell me in the comments "
But I think you did a good job! keep writing you doing great with all of your poems!
I love rhyming poems and when write rhyming poems it just sounds so fun and cool! Your great at writing
-Longlife
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hehehe, this was cute =) im not sure what this rhymetown business is though; must look it up!!!
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This is a fun read...nicely done acrostic. Still, acrostics should be aligned to the left for more impact.
Sam
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Hey pretty good write here
I love to do poems like this myself at times and you keep writing and you will become an author if you stay here on allpoetry for we all help each other be the best we can be
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I think this is really cute.
My only suggestion would be to not repeat the silliness in that last line. Maybe come up with something different.
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Billy sounds silly,Is he friends with Philly,Does he give wet Willies? Where he lives is it chilly?
lol
Great poem slick keep writing -
This was an amazing poem, I enjoy the fact you took a bit of nursery rhyme time and made it your own. Great writing skills, keep at 'em!
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Awsome Poem!
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Is Silly Billy a friend of yours or someone you've made up? Either way I enjoyed this. Acrostics are kind of hard to write but I think you did a good job. Thanks for sharing.
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Silly Billy is a character of Rhyme Town. thanks for commenting... S-99
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Love your poem that has sparks of wonderful humor flying out of it and landing all around and starting fires and burning down poet's houses and making people run screaming out into the streets and people all over the world are wondering what happened.
lol
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Some of the lines don't really flow. I'll put them down.
Loves Rhyme Town
You can see that
You love his silliness
you spelled silliness wrong
Those are the lines that I thought didn't really go with the rhythm of the piece. A lot of times when I write poems, acrostic or not, a lot of my lines don't flow very well. This is a really good poem for it being your first acrostic.
BTW -- I love your icon picture! I wondered if and when you would put one up. -
Some of the lines don't really flow. I'll put them down.
Loves Rhyme Town
You can see that
You love his silliness
you spelled silliness wrong
Those are the lines that I thought didn't really go with the rhythm of the piece. A lot of times when I write poems, acrostic or not, a lot of my lines don't flow very well. This is a really good poem for it being your first acrostic.
BTW -- I love your icon picture! I wondered if and when you would put one up. -
This is a cute acrostic. Once you write a few you will probably like to write more of them, easy to read and understand - funny too. Keep writing and trying new forms - so many to learn about and try out. Well done.
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Hey there for a first one it is pretty good I am proud Thanks for sharing this with me best wishes adn much love always be well
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