each word
every action
fit, like stacked bricks
building the foundation
of us
Author notes
Picture Credit: http://bosniak.deviantart.com/art/Forever-Lost-54681896
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture VI by PhantomsAngel87.
300 points, ended September 4, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great write
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Wonderful write wonderful...
without those foundations, where would we be... loving the take on the picture...
p.s Love the new Pic, classy and perrrrty
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How true! Trust is the foundation upon which a relationship must be built. Take away trust and the whole relationship may tumble.
This is way God demands faith. We must trust him to have a relationship with him. -
Great write
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Excellent
So much said In thirteen words
Very impressive with the picture
Rick
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What a wonderful take on the prompt
I love the trust building
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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a brilliant take on the promt good luck in the contest
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I loved this take on the prompt. I thought the way you showed that it is the little things which lay the basis for everything else was great. This was a really wonderful thought, great work x
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Sis,
What a great job you did with so few words! I love it! and you know you are sooooo right! That IS what it is. It takes so little, but yet it does build a wonderful foundation, (promises made, foundation laid) Is what I was told, and boy, how do I agree with that! Great job on this one!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Perfect thoughts for this pic! Very nice...best of luck in the contest!
Sue
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very interesting considering how few words you were allowed to use. Good job
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