I have to tell a funny tale
about my friend PK.
He's been a kindly gentleman
since the very first day.
We met through "penmen", another
gentleman on this site.
Introduced to Peteskid in the
wee hours of the night.
I got to know him through
his writings for almost a year.
I loved to see, and feel, yes touch...
I loved to even hear;
The words he played like violin
with strum of tunes I knew...
Found in his words the power of hope,
and what that hope could do.
I thought he was a youngster,
he showed respectfulness.
Still a kid at heart to me,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY and Be Blessed!
Author notes
Happy Birthday dear man. May you have many more!
In a list
A contest entry
- Peteskid is Getting Wiser!!!--birthday tribute by ten thousand cicadas.
2000 points, ended September 4, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive critique please.
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Renee, I am so glad you shared this hilarious anecdote. Amazing the impressions we give off, hmmm? I think you were actually not too far off. Our friend has been young for a very long time. Thanks for being such a special part of this birthday tribute, doll.
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"The words he played like violin
with strum of tunes I knew...
Found in his words the power of hope,
and what that hope could do."
Hi Renee - this is such a very sweet birthday rhyme..a lovely & fun gift...
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What a lovely and sweet dedication for a wonderful poet and friend...
As always you pen words that touch the heart with gladness...
Lynda
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Great birthday wishes. I'm sure he will be thrilled.
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Oh how pretty what a lovesly poem I am sure he enjoys it!
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I should be in a list of spoiled...as in 'spoiled rotten'
...Blessings... have sent me so many wonderful people, my path has been lighted with golden halos and signs along the way... and here where we all can see, just how blessed a person can be ...to have such friends...P'Kid-at-heart
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The lady.
Has shown me once again why I keep coming back
over and over, because it's so wonderful to know
someone with such a big heart and always willing to
spread her love to all she touches! very nice lady, I'm crtain the gentleman is smiling widely.
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Renee,
You Rock...this is an awesome tribute to an amazing and talented man.
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How well it is to be loved from a far
Any closer and you would have gotten a piece of cake
The best to you you special fellow and manny more to you...mac
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A fine way to show soft affection for friends.
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