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Right There

The sleep overcomes me.
The death is right by me.
I can grasp it,
I can touch it,
it is right there.

I want it,
I want it more than anything.
But I can't have it.
I can not take it.
Though it is right there.

Author notes

La de da,
I am angsty,
and this is what came,
I didn't want to make it longer.
Oh well.

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  • leysha
    September 7

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    i see what you meen on this one but it shows that we jus need to keep goinn in life and not giv up it made me feel hopeful beacuse it shows that you can be feeling down and still recover from it
    great poem


  • amelia suicide
    September 3

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    i love this poem, to be honest thats exactly how i feel at the moment and it really sucks.. but ya this poem explains it really well!!

  • Sir Squigglim
    September 2

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    It's ok, it's short but really really brilliant.

    It's always there, isn't it? Where would it go. I guess any of us can grab it if we really wanted to, except we cant.


  • vampireprincess
    September 2
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    I think it's good. short and (well not so sweet) but to the point. I liked it.