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Meet Myself Coming Back

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Dedicated to all Chironian Travelers!

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Chiron the wounded healer,
Carries through karma,
From one incarnation to another,
The original karmic wheeler-dealer!

Those who have one foot in the future,
And one foot in the past,
Cannot mend incarnate lessons cast,
No more prevails the karmic suture.

The  basis of who we are now,
Is of course who we were,
We just have to track back somehow,
Before what we seek can be brought to bear.

Neuro-triggers of negative past events,
Always marrs our future and prevents,
A clear pathway trouble free,
To where we all need and want to be..

Letting go is to let in,
Freedom of mind herein,
So what is in mind not paying rent,
Doesn't need to be there to vent...

Vent the harboured eternal grudge,
Serving only to add to the drudge,
Freedom of mind body and spirit,
Is a wise game plan and wise lifelong writ..

The human beings black-box recorder,
Your soul the thought patterns hoarder,
Only has twin hemisphere capacity,
For what is your mind inter-city!

Set in stone to free yourself,
Do not sit on the fence and dwell,
Free your inner garden elf,
And the future can be just swell!

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Copyright:K:August 2008

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Allpoetry.com Contest
August 2008
Resigning all areas of the past, living in the moment.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2419403
Well, the title says it all....
Letting the past be past and being able to live in the
moment.
If you can come up with something amazing for me that fits
this concept, many points will be coming your way.
if you disbelieve you can come up with such a thing so
randomly, then, please scroll down and read your options.
1. Why/why not- I or anyone should believe in religion or
christ himself.
2. Marijuanna/ and its effects (good or bad or both)
3. New love forming within your life (the feelings and
thoughts associated with this)
PS-
Those who enter this contest with what I forst and foremost
asked for, will get the larger award aka Gold.
Those who took the options part, shall get the second and
third awards.
Rubric I follow when judging:
-Creativity
-Emotion
-Metaphor
-Imagery
-Rhythm and/or flow
-Maturity
-Spelling and grammer
-Punctuation
-Free Verse
-Lengthy (not to lengthy, not to short)
I cant wait to see who takes the challenge and dares to be
critiqued by me
(I will be gentle, of course
Enter this contest
  * This is an anonymous contest - your name will be    
hidden from editors
* Closes in 10 days, or after 11 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 2000, Silver: 1000, Bronze: 500
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 5

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    There are some very excellent tongue twisting lines in this poem that exudes imagery in a very clever way


  • Clinging-to-Life
    September 2

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    Wonderfully tasteful and elegant

    Beautiful. One of the first that shall be entering the finalists.

    Everything here has gone beyond what I was expecting, and I truly and thoroughly enjoyed this piece.

    • Kazytc gold member
      September 2
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      Awww Thanks millions!

      Awww Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it and I am bowled over with your lovely review too, it is thanks to winderful people like you that people like me get better at poetry writing. Thanks millions for your tremendous encouragement I am touched. It was a fabulous prompt too!
      Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in
      them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx

  • diver
    September 1
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    hehe so positive i must remember to read this one again when Im having a bad day lol

    • Kazytc gold member
      September 1
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX

  • Shadow Lynx
    September 1

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    Intrigueing and interesting write, footsteps in the snow, as we walk forward the steps are more predominant, further back they fade under the fall of new snow and ahead they are yet to be imprinted. If we were the snow we could go wherever we like because we are everywhere. Yep you got the cogs turning well done with this, good luck in the contest


    • Kazytc gold member
      September 1
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
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