Where the iridescent
sunshine plays,
Lilac twirls with a
subtle haze.
Rustic amber hues twine,
in the natural soft decline.
Mustard ambiance lays still
As natures rainbow etches,
out its beauty still.
Author notes
picture promt
A contest entry
- Contest PIF Picture Prompt 10x10.. 49th Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
550 points, ended September 8, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ooh the use of colours in thsi was simply delicious ; sent little pleasureable shivers down my spine ; rainbows are so lovely!
congrats on the trophy
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Beautiful descriptions of the colors and shades, the us eo f "mustard" was so pleasant it htat perticular place in this piece, lovely indeed.
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lilac twirls is fun to say
I like rustic amber hues too
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What a beautiful poem. Translates this pic very well, with fabulous imagery.
Wonderful
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This is a truly beautiful interpretation of the prompt, it fascinates me how well people can articulate in few words, something which renders me speechless. The background overlapping made it a bit hard on the eyes however. Best to you
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its purrrty ^^
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the words flow beautifully
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Wonderful
The writing of this poem is great, it really does paint a picture in your mind. plus you have an excellent photograph to go with the poem -
Beautiful!!
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Wow this is really really beautiful!!!! Your words are very intriguing and they are so lovely!!! This is a great short simple but very sweet write!!! Great word choice and your words and stanzas flow so smooth!!! I love your picture and your background they fit your write so very perfectly!!! I love it!!!
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this is very hard to read tho.
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very good imagery here.
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Mustard ambiance lays still
As natures rainbow etches,
out its beauty still.
Beautiful. Best of Luck.
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The pics and the purple bg make this pome colorful..A good write. You should of gotten a trophy!
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This is just beautiful and stunning. Love the flow and rhyme in this piece. It's short but really paints a wonderful picture in your mind.
Totally perfect!
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what a captivating picture, where do you collect my sweet child, wonderful heart warming, in my view you won trophy not one but many with their hearts. keep it up dear
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Lovely hun
Softness of the beauty of nature captured within your words.
Mustard ambiance lays still... a wonderful line predicting the color so well
Best wishes in the contest
Julie
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beautiful
colors made beautiful lovely write ...keep up the good writes ...you dazzled my senses ...peace
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A beautifully descriptive poem. Good luck in the contest.
Sue
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