Through the shadows of
quicksilver's dawn.
An angel kneels to prayer,
hoping that the lord does
hear, what she has to say.
Kneeling on a velvet thread,
she clasps her hands tight,
then bows her head.
She prayers for love
throughout the land,
and hopes the lord
hears her commands.
Author notes
option 2 30-60 words 50 words
please credit gothic.com
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie Contest.. Interested? by Sensual Angel.
980 points, ended September 6, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really love this poem that you have written. the rhyme is flawless and it flows nicely.
I love your take on the prompt, and your poem is outstanding.
good luck in the contest
kat
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love through out the land
lovely poem with nice picture...
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Wonderful
So very well done. Such a very inspirational creation. Best of luck in the contest.
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This is so lovely
I feel you read her little mind and those prayers she wishes for shall be answered.
Best wishes to you hun in Kat;s contest
Julie
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