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Soul of Rika the dreamer

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 Soul of Rika Horse dreamer

 wild horses scream out

 Black,white and red

 White stud smells blood.

 

 Red,white and

 black dervish of hate

 rip, tear, castrate, mutilate

 Lighting storm,herds,clash

 grounds forever scared

 history lives.

 

 All souls lost,bewildered crying out

 sought the natural bridge

 of life after death.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Rheea, Credit madebroken626 of Deviant art.



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  • ea silver member
    October 26
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    wow, excellent, Rhea! Chilling and metaphorical. There must be some great folklore behind this.


  • islekine
    September 17
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    Wow Rheea!

    One of your best...
    Write on my friend...write on!



  • quantumsurveyor
    September 16

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    I'm afraid I'm a bit lost and bewildered here! Love the sensuous use of words within your context and pleased to see your reward.

    • Rheea gold member
      September 16
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      Hello my friend, racial the Red White and Black of our America. Our history, thank you for reading.

  • takemypainaway
    September 14

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    I love this Rheea you did a wonerfull job!! Although your competitor didnt enter a poem i am sure glad you did and you will move on.. thank you for entering
    --kat
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