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I Care About You

"Nothing you can say to me will make it better!"
She says with tears running down her face.
And you just stand there, watching the pain, that is seen on her face.

  You do nothing, as she runs into the bathroom.
  You do nothing, as her friends laugh at her.
  You do nothing, nothing at all.

Her friend runs after her, to the bathroom stalls,
and you just watch the rain hit the window.

"The rain is like her tears... always falling."
You hear someone say.
And without thinking about it, you are on top of them.

  You do something, as she is crying.
  You do something, as the blood starts pouring.
  You do something, a little, but something.

A teacher pulls you off of him,
and you take a stand, and go into the woman's room.

She sees your face, and she panics when she sees the blood.
But you just say,

"I did this for you, because I care about you."

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  • amelia suicide
    September 3

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    this is a great poem full of emotion and thoughts... i love the choice of words. you are realy a great poet.. your work amazes me every time!!!!!

  • vampireprincess
    September 3
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    I loved it, as I love all of your poetry.


  • just crystal
    September 2
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    i like the fact that he stood up for her. good poem hun.

  • LovesPlayToy
    September 2
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    this is beautiful...


  • Sir Squigglim
    September 2
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    that was awesome

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