Loves everyone and is
Outstanding,
Nice, and
Giving!!!
Longlife
Is A
Friend For-
Ever!!!
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Dedicated to my close friend, Longlife.
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aww. this is such a beautiful and cute little dedication to someone very special. awesome. keep penning
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Oh, I thought longlife was a long life and that's why you liked it so much. HAHA! I am laughing because kids don't think about dying anyway and they DO have a LONG life ahead.
I am glad you are loyal to your fiend. 
YAY for it! 
OH MY GOSH... look at how I spelled "friend." I am leaving it wrong because it is funny. lol
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This is good acrostic. It would have more strength if you aligned it to the left though. Nicely crafted.
Sam
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Good work here
Yes friendship is understandin love and to help them become the best they can be
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What a beautiful dedication to a wonderful girl. I think you have characterized her perfectly! I know she is glad to have you as a friend, too!
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once again thanks for writing this for me!
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Wonderful acrostic, and I love the joy in your writing!
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thank you very much.
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aw a great poem for someone obviously special in your life :] good job !
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very nice poem.
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SO BEAUTIFUL!!!! WAHHHH lol!
Thank you soooo much,for writing this poem about me! -
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your welcome. you're a really good friend... thanks for commenting on a poem about YOU!!! -slick
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another thank you
THANKS
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You have penned a wonderful acrostic poem. A delight to read about your friend. Take care. Sandy
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Great poem. It's so cool that you've got a friend like this. I wish you many happy moments with Longlife!
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