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Morning offer

   
    Morning light came,
    lazily putting both legs
    inside of my open window’s frame,
    stepping to the room
    and to my bed like a lover,
    touching with its lips
    my shoulder, my elbow,
    playing with my fingers,
    till one by one nails started to glow
    with the sun’s fire of gold.
    I felt its warm kiss arousing
    my left breast and leg
    sliding from the hip to toes,
    down the white thighs
    exploring each goosebump,
    glades and valley shadows.
    For a moment it stayed there,
    waiting for my moves.
    My other half still in the shade
    protested for this merciless touch.
    I turned my body like a slow dancer,
    inventing new elegant moves
    and as a fox blinking and peeking
    through half open sleepy eyes,
    offering to the light my other side.

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Paintings: Morning light by Amanda M. Burleson-Guthrie

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  • Ah..the softness around the words attracts the readers with a tenderful smile..you are a miraculous poet here my friend..well done...

  • Dalaney gold member
    September 8

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  • Tennessee-Joe
    September 5
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    Now that's the way to wake up!
    Joe


  • tara wilson gold member
    September 3

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    I absolutly love this moment, Sonja...gorgeous imagery & the feel of warm sun coming from this poem.

  • Dobar Dan
    September 3

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    Dobro Jutro Sonja

    What can I say - this poem is so masterfully crafted - you sure know how to get ones attention - every line so exciting - very good Sonja - Sretan dan ----------------------------------------------- Josip


  • Nermin Nazim
    September 3

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    always glowing and terrific in your vivid imageries painted words

    My dear Queen always beautiful and a pleasure to the senses and as refreshing as ever to read your poetry. sometimes it feels like that after great sleep and wonderful nights waking up is so delicious, and sometimes like today it is a torture with my backache and mood that is slighty grumpy
    extraordinarily wonderful


  • Nicolette gold member
    September 3

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    This has such a delicous, lazy feel about it...like the long, slow tongue of the sun slowly kissing the body. Wonderfully sensual....one would want to stay in this position all day along! Lovely poetry, Sonja.

    ~ Nicolette


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 3
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    delicious and richly sensual poetry.
    makes me very wistful

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