Grips of iron
tear at my soul
rent in two
can never be whole.
Lost you again
by being a fool
turned tempted eye
broke fidelity's rule.
Now so alone
lonely I cry
torn at reality
wings cannot fly.
Trapped in hell
without you here
blistering and writhing
screaming in fear.
This is my world
my lot I accept
within my insanity
dreams I forget.
Author notes
feeling a little woeful..
honesty please...
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Your poem expresses the exclusively human trait of remorse. Gosh don't we all do this? Lay blame at our own doorstep for our loneliness and proceed to beat ourselves up. Sometimes we just need to sit in that place for a while before we cast our net to the universe and see what is written on the wind.
I love the poem vici
hugs Moony
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Powerful emotions flow here
Well done my sister
Blessings and light
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deep...
It actually makes you feel the pain inside...I mean describes your pain so well...I absolutely loved it...it was touching...
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thank you so much for your kind comment..it always is nice when another writer stops to comment..
blessings..
namaste..
r
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Sis...this tears at my very soul. Now...I send you my blessings and my love...a kiss from my spirit. Speak to my Sister Goddess...be her comfort.
I love you r...
Az
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your support means so much to me..I love you Az...
blessed be..
r
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