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My marine 2

Tears flowing down my face
As you leave to go to the place.
The place I don't want you to go.
You are going to fight the foe.
You are as quiet as lamb.
And as worried as I am
I know you'll be fine.


The first days pass.
The sand slowly falling threw the hour glass.
Waiting by the phone
Feeling all alone.
I just want to hear your voice.
I want to be able to rejoice.
And see your bright smile again.

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To "My Marine" I know I've said it before. You're exactly like a big brother to me. You've always been there. I love you. Stay safe. <333

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  • lalalandgirl182
    October 4
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    i like this one alot more then the third one. It's just the right size and the rhyming is good

  • Lancashire Lad
    September 3

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    great

    you can tell you really like this person and war has obviously affected you. great piece there bravo