Walking down the lonely road.
I hear footsteps behind me.
But I turn and there is no one there.
Chills run down my spine
as a pale figure is walking ahead of me.
But when I blink
She is gone.
I turn around and see a massive crowd of spirits
Beckoning to me.
Author notes
idk... didnt come out well
A contest entry
- Ghostly Picture Prompt Options Contest by Kazytc by Kazytc.
1750 points, ended September 3, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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yea i dont really like this one the ending just ruined it...
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i liked it.. but tip dont leave it the way you did makes it seem unfinished hun lol.. plus it leaves readers on the edge of there seats and people will be like wtf.. it was getting good! kinda thing lol
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wow
this is really good stuff this is. i can sense the atmosphere like that girl said in the other comment. great stuff and somewhat eerie but very good x
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Option 5?
I am wondering if you have used Option 5 here (The street of lost souls)? Forgive me if I am wrong in assuming this!
You didn't mention whichnoption you used in the notes!
This however does have good atmosphere, which sends a nice shiver down the spine of the reader, the ambiance is intense and it realistic and you make the reader feel as if they are actually there right in the scene which is clever stuff.Love the graphics too, they help set off the entry!
Bravo, love it, well done!
Best of luck in my contest and thanks millions for entering your entry is brilliant.
Poetic Hugs & Thanks
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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