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Floating fun

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Etched with alabaster lace,
face of subtle twining grace.

Wings of iridescent flight,
like a guardian of the day

and night.

 

Fantails lead her on her way,

as she floats to find dismay.

 

Of wanted wishes that children say,

as they dream their  fairy play .

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10-20 lines picture promt

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  • 2lullabyhaven gold member
    September 5

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    This drew me in and kept me pinned...a lovely take on the prompt; Good luck to you in the contest lol


  • Riamh
    September 5
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    That is a wonderful take on the pic. Truly beautiful. Best of luck in the contest.
    Slayer

  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 5

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    Elegance of beauty and how fantastic are your soft detailed words.
    Etched with alabaster lace,
    face of subtle twining grace.
    Stunning lines I awe with
    Best wishes in the contest hun *rose
    Julie


  • Silent Hawk gold member
    September 5

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    Your

    usage of vocabulary, adds depth of beauty to the phrases you employ. Rich in description, never failing to leave the reader better for the time invested.

    Niaish