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Strategy

Knock the knight
pounce on the pawn
plan your strategy
strike at dawn.

The battle is on
for all to see
force their hand
to set their prisoners free.

The Queen meanders
where she may
mighty and forceful
a look of dismay.

Weakness shines from
my opponents eyes
strategy changes as
I plan their demise.

Divert attention
so I move unseen
Savoring your defeat
I've captured your Queen.

Author notes

this was fun...and my muse has cooperated...I hope the inspiration is adequate.
OPTION 5:
Vladimir Kush
"Chess"...(oops sorry didn't add it earlier..)

your options are amazing..no wonder you are getting quality writes..they are inspiring..blessings..and much luck with the judging..

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Comments

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 15

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    Congrats on the HM!

    Wow loving this! Just my kind of muse...lol. Can almost hear the evil Mwhahaha as I read it Wicked take on the prompt hunni, flows perfect and you kept the theme strong all the way till the end, superb!


  • moon2u gold member
    September 11
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    I love it...a game of chess
    a game of life
    hugs Moony


    • vici377
      September 11
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      Moony
      thanx so much for your kind comment...
      blessings..
      namaste..
      r

  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 6

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    This is awesome, great write, your rhyme & flow are perfect. Congrats on your honorable mention.


    whisper

    • vici377
      September 11
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      Whisper,
      thanx so much for your kind comment and your support
      blessings..
      namaste..
      r

  • Riamh
    September 5
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    An excellent take on the pic, best of luck in the contest
    Slayer

  • Kazytc gold member
    September 3

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    Fantastic! Excellent!

    This is just amazing, the rhyme and flow are exquisite! Great storyline and I assume this is based upon Option 5 in the contest?
    Love the title, love the theme, the poetic graphics and vivid imagery are fabulous and you make the reader really feel as if they were actually there, right in the scenario you so eloquently paint in poetic artistry, and the sculpting adds even more weight to this too.
    The first and the last stanza are fantastic ... these in particular move me (forgive the pun queen!).
    Bravo, brilliant entry well done love it!
    Best of luck in my contest and thanks millions for entering if you do!
    Poetic Hugs & Thanks
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xx

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