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Tim

T- together you and your family are up for anything
i- in a moment you find yourself in the dark, turn tward your family, they are the light
m- most of the time you feel alone, you are not the only one,reach out to someone and talk

L- love all you can, you never know when you will need some in return
i- it's hard to say your sorry but do it anyway, youl feel a lot better afterwards.
o- only tommrow counts, see that today is as perfect as it can get
n- never forget to lend a hand to those who need it, you never know how much it may effect that persons life
s- stay positive, for if you look only at the negative there is only depression
l- love is a precious thing, hold onto it tight and never let go
o- only thing that comes harder at you that love is life, don't surrender to the hurtles but run strait over them
v- very special people are in your life, treat them with tenderness and care
e- every day is a gift, treat it as though its always a suprise to get
s- stop and look around you, you'll see the things you don't usually notice in your busy life

Author notes

OK so now my poems finished:-) sorry it took me a little wile. thanks 4 the contest and HAPPY B-DAY TIM!!!

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  • Stardust-luvr
    September 13

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    well done as you wrote in the true spirit of our dear Lion as he would brighten our days with such positive reenforcements that we literally would forget why we were having a bad day to begin with. thank you for honoring him and many blessings always xxx


  • sunshinegirl silver member
    September 6

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    Thank you for this entry into the contest! You really sound like you knew Tim well! You did a great job on this one! Tim was an amazing person, and helped all those he cared for and loved! Great job on this one!

    Best of luck to you in this contest!