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Colors of Summer - Acrostic

Coloring the passing by moments
Of another fun filled season
Lighting up the days, trying hard to
Obtivate time from ticking
Running away farther away from
Splashes of good times…as

Oceanus flows freely…fathers and sons go
Fishing on the bayside

Splashing ocean waves of memories
Under the umbrella of blue skies
Mystery of nature gently unfolds
Mustering summer melodies
Etching in our hearts and mind
Raving vibrant colors of summer reminiscences

Author notes

Obviate means - prevent from happening
Oceanus - God of the stream that flowed around the earth in ancient mythology

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  • Disturbed Prodigy silver member
    September 6

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    lol, both are good it is hard to say which i like the best, keep it flowing my friend, keep it flowing