Oh God
let me report you sincerely
that despite
you're not taking me in confidence
while letting me to know
the address of yours
I am myself locating
the carriage
influencing me to the sky
where you incarnate
Oh God...
[Reward: double points]
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Nice flow and good imagery and thought provoking. Sincere words coming straight from the heart. His presence is always with us - we travel the road together - and while He lives in our hearts, He is already home!
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let me report you sincerely
that despite
you're not taking me in confidence
I like these lines, I like all the lines you write about how it is hard for us to locate God! Thanks for sharing your great poems with us (specially those about God).
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curious vocabulary and impressive content. could reach more with effort. take flight.
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what a lovely journey home my friend
in a carriage made of precious stone
always lovely
lways a pleasure to read
God bless...
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The uplifting is apparently the carriage, but then so is prayer, and there, I have to say, we all have one ready for journeying, lovely words.
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