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Embrace the Light

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Dedicated to fairy seekers of the light!

 


 

Be healed by the light,
Warming and so bronze and bright,
Embrace Gods loving healing rays,
Such are the rays of heavenly glaze.

Glazed with brilliance hard to miss,
When pain takes you down into an abyss,
When you need Gods healing now and most,
How wonderful is your heavenly host.

Fairies embrace the healing light beams,
When they are in pain it seems,
When somehow they are struck down,
Amidst the many miles they've flown!

Beautiful forest fairies,
Magnificent healing heavenly light,
Glowing right into souls and hearts,
Love this so caressingly imparts.

Stand a while in the bronzing rays,
Let yourself be seen in gods heavenly gaze,
Like a fairy trusting and believing,
Never lose hope of Gods love leaving...

Leaving you with no rays to heal your pain,
When life has halted you in your reign,
Be healed by the light all yours,
Believe in the divine power because..!



Copyright:K:September 2008

Author notes

Allpoetry.com Contest.
September 2008
Contest Pic Prompt by Slayer
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2420137
The picture is the prompt.
1. 10 to 30 lines
2. Please use spell check
3. Left align or center
4. No cutting or suicide
5. Reserve by all means but complete within 3 days
6. Credit the pic in AN
7. Be courteous to other poets. Read their entries and
comment.
8. Closing Date 13th September
http://media.photobucket.com/image/fairy/sono_alice/sono_al
ice2/Copiadi6utn72w.jpg?o=51
Enter this contest
This is not an anonymous contest - the editors will be
able to see your name.
Closes in 6 days, or after 14 more entries
Rewards - Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100,
Honorable mention: 3 people
Prewritten poems are not allowed.
Enter a new poem




Picture credit:
http://media.photobucket.com/image/fairy/sono_alice/sono_al
ice2/Copiadi6utn72w.jpg?o=51


Picture Depicts:
Fairy standing with her head bent over backward clutching
her side with her hands as if in pain in the beautiful
beams of warming light shining through the trees she is
standing in. Rich bronze and sepia tones.

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 13

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    Between your outstandingly beautiful background and poem Kaz, you are hands down the winner, and I do congratulate you for your wonderful take on the prompt that we can enjoy in reading...One remarkable poetess you are...Bravo for your entry and Gold trophy!


  • Riamh
    September 10

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    I do believe, Kaz, that is the best of yours that I have read so far. Well done. Thank you for entering it in my contest. Best of luck.

    Slayer


    • Kazytc gold member
      September 10
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      Awww Thanks millions Slayer!

      Awww Thanks millions Slayer, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX

  • Moqui Takoda gold member
    September 7

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    this has a lovely foreward momentum which perfects the thematic unity of words and form, of theme and emotional receipt of the beauty .... i know that means something, hope you know that means this moved me

    threeturtlesealforlovliness


    • Kazytc gold member
      September 10
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX

  • bosiarbooger gold member
    September 7
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    Beautifully written

    Very well done. enjoy the best of luck in the contest, Boog


    • Kazytc gold member
      September 10
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      Thanks millions Boog!

      Thanks millions Boog, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too! Best of luck in the contest to you too!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
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